The following rsum was submitted in response to this ad: CAM Technician to work with other technicians

The following résumé was submitted in response to this ad: “CAM Technician to work with other technicians and manage some GIS and mapping projects. Also perform updating of the GIS database. Experience required.” In a brief memo to your instructor, analyze the effectiveness of the résumé. What are some of its problems?

Kenneth Bradley 530 Maplegrove Bozeman, Mont. 59715 (406)-484-2916 Objective Entry level position as a CAM Technician.

I am also interested in staying with the company until after graduation, possibly moving into a position as a Mechanical Engineer.

Education Enrolled at Montana State University August 2016-Present Employment Fred Meyer 65520 Chinden Garden City, MT

(208)-323-7030 Janitor- 7/15-6/16 Responsible for cleaning entire store, as well as equipment maintenance and floor maintenance and repair.

Assistant Janitorial Manager- 6/16-9/16 Responsible for cleaning entire store, equipment maintenance, floor maintenance and repair, scheduling, and managing personnel Head of Freight- 9/16-Present In charge of braking down all new freight, stocking shelves, cleaning the stock room, and managing personnel Montana State University Bozeman, MT Teachers Aide ME 120- 1/15-5/15 Teachers Aide ME 120 In charge of keeping students in line and answering any questions related to drafting.

References Timothy Rayburn Janitorial Manager

(406)-555-8571 Eduardo Perez Coworker

(406)-555-2032