Revising to Improve Readability [LO-2] Analyze the strengths and weaknesses of this message, and then revise it so that it follows the guidelines in Chapters 4 through 6:

As an organization, the North American Personal Motorsports Marketing Association has committed ourselves to helping our members—a diverse group comprising of dealers of motorcycles, all-terrain vehicles, Snowmobiles, and personal watercraft—achieve their business objectives. Consequently, our organization, which usually goes under the initials NAPMMA, has the following aims, goals, and objectives.

Firstly, we endeavor to aid or assist our members in reaching their business objectives. Second, NAPMMA communicates

(“lobbying” in slang terms) with local, state, and national governmental agencies and leaders on issues of importance to our members. And lastly, we educate the motorsports public, that being current motorsports vehicle owners, and prospective owners of said vehicles, on the safe and enjoyable operation of they’re vehicles