4. A friend has asked you for help with the following application letter. Rewrite it as needed.

Dear Ms. Brown, Please consider my application for the position of assistant in the Engineering Department I am a second-year student majoring in electrical engineering technology. I am presently an apprentice with your company and would like to continue my employment in the Engineering Department I have six years' experience in electronics, including two years of engineering studies. I am confident my background will enable me to assist the engineers, and I would appreciate the chance to improve my skills through their knowledge and experience.
I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the possibilities and benefits of a position in the Engineering Department at Concord Electric.
Please phone me any weekday after 3:00 p.m.
at (555) 568-9867. I hope to hear from you soon.
Sincerely,