These sentences have too few I or \Ve constructions or too many passive constructions.

Adjust the tone.

a. Payment will be made as soon as an itemized bill is received.

b. You will be notified.

c. Your help is appreciated.

d. Our reply to your bid will be sen t nexl week.

e. Your request will be given considcrat ion.

f. This writer would like to be considered for your opening.